Atomicus's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[NG Army News 1]

Yay!

Well I'd say that the translation from script to movie went VERY well. I'll be working on the next script asap.

TheNGArmy responds:

Thank you Atomicus, It was an excellent script you wrote and i'm only sorry that some cuts had to be made. I'm sure NGAN 2 will be even better that the original.

Thanks for the review!

[Mind of a Lover]

Excellent

I'm impressed by the level of vision you have in this. I personally think you could get more out of making it longer... but the drawing was excellent, and I think your musical selection was great for the message. Keep it up.
-Atom

Versucha responds:

Than you! In the future, I'll try not to cut my movies too short. One movie that I've been doing concept work on for almost 2 years will be of good length once I feel comfortable enough with my flash work to make it (I'm too protective of it to give it to another animator).

Thanks for reviewing.

[Furby Attacks]

Great Job!

You're work is great! The drawings are awesome and the animation is smooth. I think you could try to fix the sound a little bit though, it was loud to me. But maybe I'm just sensitive about it since my ears are big and pick up sound better. :-P

You're going to continue this one? It should be great and I can't wait to see it. I actually have an audio clip of a prank call where a furby kills a guy. If you're interested you can find me in Female Animators Appreciation Club. Keep up the great work!

Violet-AIM responds:

That prank call sounds interesting. I might want to use that in another episode of Furby Attacks. I'll get started on the next episode pretty soon I think. Thanks Atomicus.

[Sweet potato]

It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy.

Kind of like a potato! ^_^
Anyway, your graphics were awesome and the animation was wonderfully smooth. The sound had good quality, but you might want to try and fix the volume, it seemed loud to me. Plenty of blood and gore for violence. I liked that you gave ending choices, that was great! Your humor... well the idea of giving a potato just says it all. 10. Great job! Keep 'em coming, and maybe if you want you can join the Female Animators Appreciation Club, cause I'm sure there are quite a few gals out there who would be inspired by your work!

nef responds:

<3 Thankya ^^

[A Story Untold EP:1]

Quite good

Very good job with getting the story out, so I gave a 10 for style. The graphics were quite good, but I think a little more time could have been spent on making individual locks... but I understand that characters take time to create. I gave a 6 for sound only because "Duel of the Fates" was quite overbearing to what was being said. Violence was there but wasn't excessive. I think interactivity and humor speak for themselves. Good job, maybe next time for the animation try to draw different perspectives on the characters so you don't get that "flip effect" where you have a paper thin character... other than that great job!

daspope responds:

actually i wanted the paper thin effect but it didnt turn out quite how i wanted, i didnt want their keys to un hook then re-hook again, i played with it a bit to try and get it how i wanted, then gave up because it looked fine. and i did lower the music for the text to be heard better, it sounds clear on my computer, any other people have trouble hearing the voices?

[Work It! Shadow]

Workin it Overtime!

I love Evilzug's Work it! flash... you're attempt to recreat his work using Da Funk I have to admit would probably be pretty hard. Most of the animation was right in time with the music which is good. But the animation didn't quite make it to the end of the song... next time try to make it longer.

HyperFire responds:

its not finished...heh heh heh

[Acid Speed Ep1: NG Cameos]

Hello Blaklyon

Here's that review I promised you.

For your Acid Sonic, if you can balance the sound a little then it'll be perfect. I don't have any complaints about the drawings, there could be more details in the characters, but that's not easy to do.

For Genocide... the sound is a little better than sonic, but tweaking is never a bad thing. The drawing is a just as good, you have a few more details on the characters here than in sonic, but again, details are a rough thing to do.

For breakin, it looks good, as soon as you have a chance I'd go on with this.

Overall. Sound is decent, drawing is good, animation smoothness could use a little work. Maybe use more frames per minute. Your style is great, I think it makes your work more unique, so don't change that unless you want to. Other than that I'd say you do well! Keep it up!

-Atomicus

Blaklyon responds:

Thanks for the review! I didn't expect you to review all of my animations in one review!

[Texas_Chainsaw_Suicide]

Well...

I'm impressed with the job you did on taking your head off...

ColinMatthews responds:

well all i had to do is chop it off... its pretty easy =D

[Steve's randome B-Day]

HAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!

Love the random! That and StrongBad's Techno!!

GiAm responds:

thank you , im glad you like it

[CrapJack]

Pretty good...

It's rare to see first flashes that are this good. Keep it up, ask for more flash help in the NG Flash Forum. :-)

dragon-lord-19 responds:

thank you